My story, from my book soon to come out about fallout 3!

Post » Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:02 am

while I used a second knife hidden in my pants to swiftly stike into his head



ok this is really really really good.

just that line made me crack up.
this guy might as well as be pullin knives out of his ass for goodness sake.

but i would definetly read the finished product it's very well done.
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jennie xhx
 
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Post » Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:12 pm

Maybe its just that I have never seen these before but iv played the game for quite a wile now but
Never saw binoculars, radar grenade or 12 people on my pip-boy. Maybe its on the DLC?
I dont remember using the lazer sight either.


Yea, I've seen some weapons mods with all kinds of wicked stuff
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Post » Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:08 am

First of all, this should be in the fanfic board.

Second of all, a publisher did approach Bethesda about publishing Fallout books and Bethesda is not currently interested in any third party products that would touch upon the Fallout canon.
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Mark
 
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Post » Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:24 am

Ahhhh I cant read this...

I walked
I saw
I duck
I jumped
I put
I sneak

Walking towards the....
Seeing the...
Quickly ducking...
Jumping high..
Placing...
Sneaking....


Please less I did...
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Post » Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:32 pm

Yeh the writing needs improvement i agree, but one thing i dislike is the story line, what kind of person in the capital wastleland, after a nuclear holocaust, would have that kind of equipment? Honestly no one would every have that kind of weaponry, it sounds more like a super hero comic.
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Post » Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:28 pm

Very Nice but when is it coming out and is it a collection of storys or one long naritive. Love it by the why. You shoud check out mine its the same style.
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