Hello, I hope I get whatever feedback I need for my first mod I am creating; it's a Shout mod. I will make a hidden sanctum inside the Temple of Talos in Windhelm because that is what the Shout is based on.

This is sort of a cheat mod and I will post the brainstorm template soon, but, I need a female volunteer for the female players with a female character.

I may need a male voice if you guys do not like the recording of my shouting of the Words of Power.

Here is the shout:

Shout Name: Wrath of Talos
Words of Power: Ambition-Ferocity-Anger
Shout Effects: Increases melee damage by 30% and absorbs Health and Stamina for 5 real-world minutes. Can only be used once a day.
Description: Feel the essence of Talos's rage encumber you as he aids you in your most dire need.

Does anyone have any suggestions on what I should change or do a majority of you think the shout is good enough. Should I make the duration of the effects longer? Should I make a cheat version of the shout. Should I improve the effects of the Shout?

I just came up with this idea, so, it should take me a few days to complete. I need to translate the Words into Dragon language, which may be a little tedious unless I can find an site that teaches Dragon tongue.

Please, your feedback would be very, very much appreciated.

Just so you guys know, I posted a message on the Nexus Forums for the sake of volunteers; I just wanted to tell you guys.
http://forums.nexusmods.com/index.php?/topic/781522-im-creating-a-shout-mod-i-need-a-couple-of-volunteers-more-details-in-post/

Thanks!

NOTE - Men, please do submit your shouts if you know Dragon tongue for future use.

Looking at the TES Wiki, the dragon language for this shout is Paar Norok Bah, which deviates a bit from the usual "three 1-syllable words" construction of a shout. I'm not sure why that's the standard for shouts when there are a ton of multi-syllable words in the language - it's probable that nobody will care that it's a bit different.