Since the contest is over, I thought it would be nice to start a thread where we can all post and discuss our entries. If you entered the contest, post your entry here and get some feedback. Here is mine, tell me what you think:


"Galus Mondari"

Galus hungers for power like a skooma addict craves moon sugar and Lorkhan yearns for change. The power of the arcane arts are the life blood in his veins. From a very young age, Galus could always be found with his head buried in a book. While the other Dunmeri children (fools!) were busy playing games, Galus was gathering up as many spells as he could fit in his mind. Each new spell increased his ability to manipulate and master the world around him. It was this veracious drive for knowledge that helped him excel in the Mages Guild. And yet, it would ultimately be his undoing....

Deep inside Coldharbor, where Molag Bal reigns supreme, the Harvester of Souls saw the weakness of the young mage Galus. The Prince seduced him with a promise of unimaginable power and Galus was drawn away from his objective and his allies. Alone and deep inside the hostile Realm, Galus was captured and subjected to the most ironic of tests that the King of [censored] could imagine. Trapped in a cage, Galus was used for magical target practice by the minions of Molag Bal, thus advancing the pursuit of arcane power as he had so desperately desired.

Edit: Apparently one of Molag Bal's nicknames includes a censored word. I'm pretty surprised that this word was censored, but you guys all know what he is the King of.