i was wondering if this poem i had would be good enough to enter and maybe win a poetry contest. feel free to comment.

An ode to Halo

You’ll see me fraggin’
With loads of T-baggin’

The sound of THUNDER

Brought asunder

By my insane sniper skills

Look at me rack up them kills

One noob, two noob

Red noob, blue noob

I win it for all

Never known what its like to fall

I’ll put a halo your head

Before you realize your even dead

From the pit to beaver creek

You might say I’m a control freak

From DMR’s to a railgun

There’s nothing to limit the fun

I run up on you with my shotty

Its time to wreck this party

Ill capture your flag

with mad mongoose swag

jetpacks and armor lock

I’m wipin’ out fools like Tupac

Theres no going solo

You always got a team in halo

Well, it's an admirable attempt. Go ahead and enter it, but you might want to clean up the grammar and spelling a little. Also, "solo" and "halo" don't particularly rhyme, but still not bad.

Hehe, I like the rhyming! I am no Halo fan but I still understood it. Good job!

If I may ask, is this a poetry contest online or something near you irl? Just curious

its the "national ameteur poetry contest" you mail in your poem.

i have another im thinking about entering also.

I liked it, it was funny.

thanks i kind of made it up in a quickspot because the paper was due( high school english from a couple of years ago i updated the weapons and removed a drrug refrence)

Slant rhymes are as good as any rhymes in my book.

Overall it's not the worst poem I've ever read.