Hello people of the Dishonored General Discussion!

I’m writing fanfiction as an elective at my school, and I would really like to share what I have written with the Dishonored community and would appreciate any constructive criticism you can offer me.

Over on Fanfiction.net, I have a story called Blood and Coin. It is based on The Knife of Dunwall DLC and is written from an original character’s perspective, as well as Daud’s perspective, at times. My character, Arissa Daurana, is one of Daud’s top Whalers. She is relatively close to Daud because of her capability as an assassin, and a leader. And yes, I did say she. I understand that I have broken established lore in creating Arissa, yet aside from that, I have done my absolute best to stick to the established lore and in-game events.

As I cannot post links yet, my story can be found by either going to Fanfiction.net in the Dishonored archive, or you can type into any internet search engine “Blood and Coin by Vaidhra” without quotes. The search engine should pull up my story. My story contains many spoilers for the Dishonored main campaign, The Knife of Dunwall, and bits and pieces of The Brigmore Witches, as I have done recent revisions to include TBW’s lore into my story. Also, my story is rated T and does contain swearing, though I have done my best to make sure it’s in context, and not simply because I could write the swearing in.

I really hope you enjoy my story, if you decide to read it. If I have disappointed you, then I’m sorry and I hope you have a good day/night, wherever you may be located. Finally, thank you in advance for any constructive criticisms, if you have any to offer.

-Vaidhra