Billy's Destiny Comic : Othor Games

» Sat May 28, 2011 3:25 pm

BILLY'S DESTINY
This is not considered advertising, right? As I'm only showing off my work and it's for no profitable reasons. Well, if it is then I'm sorry and moderators may lock this topic.

Anyway, I started working on a comic recently, I just want more and more people to see it so I'll have some motivation to continue working on it.
It's about a high-school boy who has the most bad luck in the world, later on you find out why. So basically it's a whole comic about abusing a guy xD

Tell me your thoughts!

(It's on deviant art, so if you don't know the website already, click on the image to enlarge it)
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-01-206485786?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=13
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-02-206485923?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=12
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-03-206486039?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=11
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-4-207062207?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=9
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-5-207844098?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=1
http://darkdeliverians.deviantart.com/art/Billy-s-Destiny-Strip-6-207844425?q=gallery%3Adarkdeliverians%2F749107&qo=0

That's it for now, I'll make this my official thread for Billy's Destiny and update when I'm done with a new strip

Oh, and have fun!

» Sat May 28, 2011 6:00 pm

Pretty good... keep it coming.

» Sat May 28, 2011 4:39 pm

Pretty good... keep it coming.

Agreed

» Sat May 28, 2011 11:20 pm

Really?

thanks! Will do and will improve.

EDIT: OH! and if you have any ideas for strips then you're more than welcome to post them!

» Sun May 29, 2011 1:02 am

i liked it. I was a little confused as to who was talking in the first one, but I was able to follow the rest! Good work dude! nice art skills by the way. :thumbsup:

» Sat May 28, 2011 5:05 pm

I think for a strip, I'd prefer more of a punchline at the end of each. Grandpa's Bath was the best of the bunch.

» Sat May 28, 2011 7:46 pm

I think for a strip, I'd prefer more of a punchline at the end of each. Grandpa's Bath was the best of the bunch.

Yeah, I'm aiming for that

I think it's visible that I tried though, I have some GREAT ideas for future strips, so it'll only get better and better from here on out.

» Sat May 28, 2011 11:44 am

I chuckled a bit. Not bad! Better than I could do haha.

» Sat May 28, 2011 1:19 pm

Great art, hope the story advances in the next strip. Found it a little funny, keep it up.