I thought it was a good amateur film. But as always, there were things you could have added/left out
First of all, the mods looked horrible. If this wasn't a Fallout movie I wouldn't mind, but it being Fallout it looked utterly terrible. The whole eye scope and ghillie suit thing was way to Modern Warfare
Second, Why did you keep the scene where he first sees the companions? It looked so akward and horrendous. You seemed to be going for a "prison breakout" theme which was great. But why did the Courier have to talk to each companion individually and stand around a bit before leaving the prison? I would have gotten them running the hell out of there! Also, the whole vertibird escape felt too much like Modern Warfare 2 or some Michael Bay movie.
Third, The explosion ending was nice, remember the shot after it blew up? You should have used that for the explosion scene. The explosion itself seemed small and contained where you were shooting from. I think it would have been bigger and more destructive if you panned out.
So if it is not supposed to be a Fallout movie. I give it 4/10. If it's supposed to be Fallout. I give 1/10. Here's why,
Cinematography: 5/10 (You had good shots, but it could have been extremely improved)
Music 6/10 (Good music, but a little too techno in some places.it just didn't fit the Fallout atmosphere)
Plot: 3/10 (Typical prison escape plot that wasn't very well done. I'm looking at you talking to companion scene.)
I would go more into detail on this, but i think you get my point.
All in all well done amateur film.I'm not trying to be mean, just a little constructive criticism.

I hope you take this into thought in your next film.