Hey guys I made a let's play video on the thieves guild quests and I wanted your feedback on it. Am I good enough at commentary to make more videos?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kkai6HEfgPk&feature=channel_video_title

Not bad. Your voice isn't highly irritating like some LP's, but I find it odd to start on a certain quest line. Most people start from the beginning of the game, that's the fun of watching. I wouldn't watch this simply because it's not from the beginning of the game.

All that being said, however, not bad. I'd watch it IF it was from the beginning of the game, not a certain faction quest.

Also, that's what Skyrim on the PC looks like? My Xbox has higher resolution textures.