» Fri May 27, 2011 4:03 am
I've recently been re-working this script, giving it a new intro and such, and the original 31 pages have now blown out to 44! I'm still not fully done either. I've yet to re-write the ending to tie in with the new changes.Is anyone interested in reading this new version when I'm done? Particularly those who read the first one, as I'm interested to know what you make of the changes.