I'll start where the problems begin occuring. So I go over to meet the guy that’s trying to silence me, Thalorn. I’m talking to him he tells me to leave and all of a sudden strangers are attacking and kill his wife. I kill them and save his life. He calls me an imperial dog or something for supporting the Imperials I think he was referring to saving Margarets life. But my character is sided with the stormcloaks, so that doesn’t make sense. He tells me character he will have me killed… I’m like okay stupid I could kill you right here but I’ll carry on and meet the other conspirator, Nepo. So I meet him and aparantly he has been Madanock’s agent for years killing random people, which does not make much sense. If they’re killing imperials to keep in control, then why does Mekils note say strike terror into the hearts of the Nords? So I kill Nepo and then go to meet my contact.
At this point, everyone and their dog is getting killed or doing the killing in Markarth so I walk into the Talos shrine expecting a fight. Lo and behold it’s the city guard. They killed my contact, an innocent civilian who had a wife and baby that was soon to be born (which I never even saw). And apparently they have been bought out and are working for Madanock which has an agreement with Thalanor who works with Nepo who tried to kill him. Along with the complete this cluster [censored] of confusion, if Madanock had bought out the guards, why is he still in jail? So the guards offer me a choice, come peacefully to jail to spend eternity there or fight my way out. Well my character is an Orc that is level 24… No way I’m being taken to jail by corrupt guards.
So I take them out. But here’s the odd part, as soon as the conversation began with the guards, the quest completed thingy popped up. So after I killed them I was wondering how the quest was even complete for many reasons: why did the Forsman try to kill Thalanor, I need to kill Madanock, I need to kill Thalanor, is it just these guard or are the other guards involved to, is the Jarl involved? Lots of unfinished business so how the hell could the quest be over. So I killed all the guards in the shrine, so no witnesses. I step outside to go to the jail to finish what I started and apparently all the guards have been bought out because they attack me. At this point I’m thinking this is a seriously bugged quest because every time I killed a corrupt guard I increased in bounty… So I decided maybe I wasn’t supposed to choose that route because I’m supposed to die. So I reloaded a save and choose to be taken as a prisoner (which is [censored] because it’s a death warrant). The prison that was supposed to be “the most secure prison in all of tamriel” was a joke. It was ridiculously small, and I laughed at the notion that this supplied half the silver for all of tamriel... It was just a cave that had a locked gate... Not very advanced so I don't understand why such a big deal was made about it. I decided this was a mistake. So I reloaded a save and choose to fight my way out again.
So I kill the guards inside then I kill all the guards outside by going Berserk mode. I go in to kill Thalanor, he attacks me before I even attack him, but lo and behold he is unkillable! I dropped his health completely twice, very easily… So at this point I’m really confused. So I reload to before I walked in the Treasury to kill him. I decide to go to the prison and take out Madanock. I go in there and take out the guards. And for some reason I can’t even open the prison bar door, like no text even appears. Well what the hell. So now by this point I am quite agitated. I decide to meet the jarl and figure out what the hell is going on. So I go in and kill a few more guards, and as I’m attacking these guards this higher ranking guard carries out a conversation with some hooded person about some random quest. Didn’t notice the homicidal orc tearing through guards right in front of him. So I go to take him out next, believeing he is also bought out. Well turns out he is also unkillable. Which leaves me with nothing else to do.
This quest makes no sense at all. On any level. Once I was killing the guards I was thinking, well hell everyone in this city is corrupt and both anti-imperial empire and and anti-stormcloak. How do they even exist at all? How has the Imperial Legion not walked up and killed all of these idiots instead of sending in agent after agent that apparently get killed. So I’m thinking am I going to become the Jarl of this city since I’m going to have to wipe the slate clean and take out everyone? Am I going to protect the city until stormcloak reinforcements relieve my position even though Im deep behind enemy lines? Am I going to have to make a speech and inform the citizens of what happened and let them decide which side they want to join? Am I going to have to kill the imperial agent Margaret or try to convince her to join the rebellion because she was essentially sent to her death? Am I going to have to enlist civilians into a milita and dress them up as the regular Markath guards so no Imperial agent or Thalmor is any wiser, and if they show up on patrol will I have to ambush them or let them walk around twidling my thumbs? Will I have to send a messenger to inform Ulfric Stormcloak of the situation? There is so much possibility for this quest, assuming it ever gets fixed.
Well I am going to have to reload a save from way before all of this. I have wasted so much time replaying this quest and writing this post. And then to top it off, how will I know when and if this gets fixed? Am I just going to try again in a few weeks hoping I don’t waste more time? This is game breaking. A quest that involves the entire city of Markath is full of plotholes and what I believe are bugs; this makes one of the cities nonexistent in my mind. Which is ridiculous If these are not bugs, then whomever made this quest was incredibly sloppy and seriously out of it. I have had a great experience cup until this point. There are some things I am critical of, but this is a disgusting and embarrassing mess up. : (
P.S. For all of those who think I'm a troll because I have a new account, I'm contacting the admins/mods about that. Apparently my other account got messed up. I haven't logged in in a long time, but I did change my password the last time the site got hacked so I don't know what happened. But anyway I'm not a troll. Been playing Elder Scrolls since Morrowind, over ten years ago when I was 9. So I have a lot of credibility and experience with this series. Please fix this. This is embarrassing.
Edit: I went through and cleaned it up, including adding some ideas to improve the quest.


