Please overlook the horrible voice acting. I've been sick as hell so my voice sounds like caca, but that still don't hide the fact that I can't act. These lines, when I'm satisfied with my final dialog, will be done by good actors with good gear to record.
I'm more interested in whether the mad Max references are too much or not. It's a nod by me to one of my favorite franchises, and a good place to rip it off because frankly, I svck creatively, lol. I admire writers who can sit down and write a quest mod from beginning to end before they build it. Me, I kinda hack it along as I go, and 3 weeks ago I didn't even have a fight cave in my imagination. I'll post a tour of the cave later. I'm really happy with how it turned out.