Hello everybody !
So for two weeks ( More or less ) I thought about a really complex and long backstory for my character(s).
Some people recommended me to make it short and develop but that just don't goes for me.

Anyway here's the story , and it begins with the origins of the house..

" House Kha-Zor
Formed by Urzog Kha-Zor during the great war to avoid total destruction of his family.
He built the house far from the raging war at the Dragontail Mountains in Hammerfell.
By that , risking his own army position as an Imperial Tribune.
After establishing his family , he's going back to Cyrodiil with his Orcish battalion destroying any Thalmor forces on the way.
Came back to Cyrodiil only to see its terrible state...

He commands his people to claim back some lands around the Imperial city , after massive and deadly battle that lasted for two weeks his people reclaim Aleswell and more roads to the side of the Empire..."

I'll add more of course , but it all takes time..

Rate , tell me if you see any mistakes / grammar , comment !

The only gripe that comes to mind at the moment is that your story should include orcish naming lore. The house would be "gro-Zor".

Maybe it could be "gro-Kha-Zor" but that seems awkward.

Nice backstory but Orcish names usually follow the format: Name - Gro(Male)/Gra(female) - fathers(male)/mothers(female) name.

So it would be better if the name were House Gro-Zor.

Well , yes you have a point in there I'll see what I can do

Orc names can be whatever. they don't have to be conventional. i have an Orc named Auron. i didn't even follow the naming system for my main character Argonian. His name is Cesaret which is Turkish for courage [no i'm not Turkish i just liked the name] I also made a great house for my main character Cesaret. And i liked the story.

Thanks !