How detailed is your background story?

Post » Wed May 09, 2012 2:18 am

I'm not a good writer but I also created my character's backstory after studying the lore the game, so here it goes:

Name: Fenrick
Race: Breton
Age: 31

Ulfgar was an old nordic warrior who roamed the land of Tamriel as a soldier for hire. During one of his travels through Vvardenfell he met a young Dunmer wench whom he fell in love with. To live with his beloved elf, Ulfgar decided to settle in the Dark-Elven province and forsake his mercenary days. Shortly after his marriage the Red Mountain erupted destroying most of the province and killing his wife along with thousands of residents. Emotionally destroyed, Ulfgar wandered the lands of Tamriel once again trying to run from his sorrow and leave his sad memories behind him. Taking sustainance from what nature provided he no longer cared about his future.

His travels led him to Camlorn, High Rock, when he realised his old body could no longer stand the life in the wilderness and so he became a beggar in the streets of the big city. Not that it was any easier to survive there than in the wilds but at least he didn't have to hunt or avoid being hunted by savage beasts on a daily basis.

The year was 4E 170 and while roaming the crowded streets of the "Jewel of West", Ulfgar entered a dark alleyway in search for a quiet place to take a nap. When he was almost falling asleep he heard the sound of what seemed to be a baby crying near a pile of barrels and wooden crates. Upon checking closely he found a newborn baby boy. The image of that defenseless little child left to his own fate broke the old man's heart. Ulfgar took the baby as his own and raised him as best as he could. He named the boy Fenrick wich means wolf in an ancient Nordic dialect. It was hard enough to find food and shelter for himself, let alone a baby but he did his best to protect his adopted son.

Ulfgar told Fenrick about all the adventures he had during his travelling days, often exaggerating a little and also taught the boy how to defend himself. During the harsh winter of 4E 184 Ulfgar died leaving young Fenrick completely alone in this world for the second time in his life.

Fenrick decided he no longer wanted to live in the streets and left Camlorn to search a new life in the outskirts of the big city. There he met Cienne, a young and beautiful lady that shared with him a common past of street life. She told him about a group of thieves who lived in the woods and robbed merchants coming in and out of Camlorn. She said they were a nice bunch and would give her food and coins for valuable information about things going on around the city. Cienne took Fenrick to the thieves where he asked to join them. At first they laughed at him but as soon as he disarmed two of their members with a swift strike of this blade they decided to give him a chance. Fenrick not only joined the group of thieves but he became their leader after a few years. Robbing from rich merchants and noblemen they almost never employed violence, usually getting in and out of the crime scene undetected. Even though their actions were famous in a large region ranging from Daggerfall to Wayrest noone could tell who they were or where they hid.

That was till one day when one of the group members betrayed them for money telling a nobleman who was their next victim about what was about to happen. The guards set up a trap and all of the group was killed except for Fenrick who managed to escape. When he went back to their hideout he found the place torn apart and guards waiting for him. He decided that staying in High Rock was too dangerous now that his identity was no longer a secret and so he fled to Skyrim, the homeland of his father Ulfgar. For the third time in his life, Fenrick was completely alone.

To be continued when I find out how TES V begins...

That's really good! I have written a few back stories for my characters also - on average about 3000 words or so each. I never intend to let them go on so long, but as most writers know, the characters start to write themselves and they don't want you to stop so you have to keep going . . .
I felt like a total fool for doing it until I realised others do it too. Ah, what a wonderful sense of camaraderie, I must say! Keep up the good work man.
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 12:46 pm

Do I sense a hint of influence from asoiaf? I'm not trying to call you out, I'm just curious.
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Ronald
 
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 10:58 am

I have a basic one at the moment, but it's due to change.
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Sherry Speakman
 
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Post » Wed May 09, 2012 1:11 am

Not very if at all.
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Francesca
 
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 10:44 pm

I'm the last Dragonborn.
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Adam Baumgartner
 
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 3:29 pm

I'm the last Dragonborn.

Nope! I'm the last Dragon born! Not you!

My Story is:

Im a dragon born! I killed people because they said they r the last dragon borns! So they arrested me for killing people. But then a dragon rescues me from beheading and proofed that i'm the last dragon born for real!
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 3:07 pm

@BALEFUL

Great story man! It unfolded nicely and it'd be nice to see you rework the beginning if you ever get the chance :) I'm a big fan of drama, and this had plenty.

Do I sense a hint of influence from asoiaf? I'm not trying to call you out, I'm just curious.


There was a slight influence from it, yes :)


*Also, time to buy me a couple of energy drinks and snack food, because tonight we dine in Skyrim!
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 5:38 pm

My guy's backstory isn't done yet. I think that's what I'll spend my time doing while that last stretch of waiting for midnight happens.
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 4:50 pm

I'm still working on the final chapter for my backstory and I plan on tweaking chapter3 (just doesn't feel right). Link is in my signature if you're interested
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 8:42 pm

I have a very general story.
My character will be the descendant of my Oblivion Nord I played originally.
He won't know it however.
I will have a rough idea of his personality, and his crime for his original prison sentence.
I am going to be playing an iconic 'heroes journey" archtypical experience with him, he is moral and ethical for the most part, and isn't the best with a sword,...until his adventure is about to begin.
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 11:41 am

I've got 4 characters with detailed backround story's, but I'm too lazy to post them here.

-Mr. Maric
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Post » Wed May 09, 2012 12:40 am

i have a simple one started in my mind and I add on to it as the story progresses. I've done it for Morrowind and Oblivion so I won't stop now.
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Post » Tue May 08, 2012 1:07 pm

My guy's backstory isn't done yet. I think that's what I'll spend my time doing while that last stretch of waiting for midnight happens.


That's my plan as well, [censored] Jones.

Dare I ask, how you got that name?

Haha Horrible Bosses was a hilarious movie.
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