I just wish the voice acting could have been better.
Most of the dialogue is well written, but the delivery is very flat and uninteresting, and it lacks emotional depth. The result is bland and uninteresting characters, and very few memorable scenes. Also, the villains sound like parodies of cartoon archetype villains. Most of the major characters are rather boring to listen to. Emily seems to be taking the death of her mother rather well, and admiral Havelock is a very bland character.
I don't know if this is intentional, but I feel a bit disappointed that more effort was not put into the voiceacting. It seems like a wasted opportunity when you have created such a rich world with such an interesting story of revenge. It would really have made me much more emotionally invested in the story and boosted the immersion.
I also think it would have been great to flesh out the relationship between Corvo and Jessamine and Emily even more before killing off the Empress.
But thanks for a great game nonetheless ^^ great job.