A short background on my character

Post » Fri May 11, 2012 10:59 am

Wasn't sure which forum to post this is. If this is the wrong one. Can someone please move it to the right place. Thank you !

A page from the journal of Wyndmere. ( Real name unknown )

Morndas, 17th of last seed, 4:48pm. ( Game Time )

It's been 3 years..........3 years since my life changed forever. I witnessed the death of my husband & my 2 children. I was out gathering herbs, My husband was home sick with our children. I came home to see our home..........Our home in flames. My husband & children..........Still trapped inside. I tried to get to my family. The flames were to much for me to handle alone. For the last 3 years, I have searched for clues, For answers. Who would want to harm my family? My husband was a good man. He had a kind & gentle heart. He was the kind of man, who'd give you the shirt off his back. If it meant you'd stay warm on these cold nights. Even if it meant he'd freeze himself.

My children....They were innocent. They didn't need to die, Not like this. They had a whole life ahead of them to look forward to. My husband was a simple blacksmith. I vowed this very day, I would find the ones who murdered my family. I will avenge there deaths. After searching for 3 long years. I finally had a clue to the ones I have been searching for. They were last seen heading for the skyrim border. Then those imperial caught me. I was to be excuited ( spelling?) Just as I thought my journey was about to end. A dragon attacked Helgen. I was sure this was the end. I wouldn't live to avenge the death of my family.

At that moment. An Imperial soldier, Named Hadvar. Helped me escape. After we made our escape. During the long walk to Riverwood, To speak to his uncle. I told him what happend to my family. I needed someone to talk to. It's been 3 years since I had anyone to talk to. I have no family, No friends. Those who I once called friends. Turned there backs on me. When I needed them most. Now, I have lost track of those I search for. Hadvar, An imperial soldier. Says he's alot like me. Would do what ever it takes to avenge the deaths of loved ones. To be believe, He suggested if I want to gather the information I seek. To travel to Riften, To the thieves guild. Says they're good at gathering information. When it's needed. He also suggested, If I want to learn to survive. To avenge the deaths of my family. To seek out the brotherhood. This, coming from an imperial soldier. I think I may have made a new friend. The gods know, I sure could use a friend in these dark times. But, Where do I begin looking for dark brotherhood?
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Dina Boudreau
 
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Post » Fri May 11, 2012 11:07 am

That's a pretty good character back-story, but there's one story flaw that would bother me to much to use it for myself. It's the fact that the fire from the house was to hot to handle. I mean, I would think that the Dovahkiin would be able to handle intense heat like that for short periods of time.
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Post » Fri May 11, 2012 1:52 pm

That's a pretty good character back-story, but there's one story flaw that would bother me to much to use it for myself. It's the fact that the fire from the house was to hot to handle. I mean, I would think that the Dovahkiin would be able to handle intense heat like that for short periods of time.


This is before she finds out her true destiny in life.
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