Whats wrong with it? I picked a $330 6970 and $130 of ram, cut the ram out and a smaller card and there you go.
2 750G hdds $279.
Thats $739 up front.
You want something that is going to last, I spent $1,600 on mine two years ago when the AMD 1055T and 5870 was new.
If you are going to build it, build it right, what I have there is a pretty snazzy build, only thing it lacks is a 7970 but its still $550 so I went with a 6970.
You could go even lower with a 5870, cut the $130 of ram (16 gigs) down to 8 ($50) and only one HDD and save a lot of money off the top.
That build has 16 gigs of ram, a I3 with a good cooler along with two 750 Gig HDDS and a 6970.
It's weird how overconfident you are in your very unbalanced build. A 6950 and 2500K with 8GB of RAM should be running around $800. Nothing you've added to get it up to $1300 adds
anything to the performance of the build.
Tell me, if 8GB of RAM can be found under $50 easily, why would you pay $130 for 16GB, which is equivalent to buying 8GB of RAM twice. Which gives no benefit to 8GB unless you're running multiple VMs or some other RAM intensive task.
And i3 with a good cooler? Why? This makes no sense. The i3 has a locked multiplier. A good cooler does no good, since you wont be overclocking it. That money should be spent on
a better CPU.
The PSU costs about 2x as much as it should. Sure, modular is nice, and efficient is nice, but an AX? Serious overkill.
Your method of choosing parts is not very good, and you probably shouldn't be trying to pass it off as "good advice" to people who don't know any better.