Bored? How About Some Critique 8d

Post » Thu May 26, 2011 9:48 pm

Oh yes, it's my good ol http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5043/27415467.jpg which I've been working on for over two years!! (The head and hat are the only parts mine, the body is made by Simon or whoever made the final DCOTE models, but I did the texture.Anyone able to help me get the left one looking closer to the right? Critique is greatly accepted. I know EXACTLY how it really needs to look, just somehow. I know I need to get this boufhead look applied to my version (more of a square-shaped head, tired eyelids, soft skin tone with stubble) but I just haven't got the ides how I can apply it.Also, be sure to check out http://stormware.deviantart.com/art/The-Dark-Corners-of-the-Earth-124414613. I worked on it the other night and updated it today.
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 3:21 am

I would say his lower lip is a bit too thick, and could easily be confused looking at the other render since it has a little bit of a shadow area painted underneat the lip area, but otherwise getting pretty close.
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