Because of Emil's crippling inability to write, most every story in Fallout 3 is heavily flawed. Ashur didn't come off as well as Caesar, but I do agree with your assessment. Caesar's tale is merely Ashur's written competently.
I like your quote "Because of Emil's crippling inability to write..." I hate how retards say "Bethesda made Fallout 10x's better." Does no one see that they copied an already brilliant idea and pasted some elder scrolls into it?? Like that crippled sergeant in Novac who teaches you to cripple someone by holding back and power hit....hmmm, sound like Oblivion to me. Don't get me wrong I love the Fallout series, only by nature, and I do love what Bethesda did to the series. You can't be praised 100% for someone else's idea. It's not like they completely added an whole lot of different ideas into the game. I'm sure Brian Fargo had the D.C. Wasteland and Mojave desert in his head. I want to see some off the wall sh*t added to the Fallout series. What happens in Germany?? China?? I know they did the reds in Anchorage but come on, change from the USA, go further man. The Brotherhood couldn't of gone overseas, lets see some initiative!!! No alien sh*t though man, I don't want no Star Trek....or Wars either!!!! Stay away from Star Wars PLEASE!!!!!! Although I did like how they strayed from the Vaults. I'll give them that.