It is just a plain philosophy book it is very broad
Obviously i had to open my mind and use an artistic view also, to get the book more readable, to get it more light
So now i am thinking in the direction of these artistic themes, example in stead of a boring title and some boring content that is not really needed in the book
example in stead of naming the book "modern philosophy of the mind" i could name the book for example "the sea of ideas"
you know things like that, so people will enjoy it more
im on the right track again im sure i will find something soon enough i will be happy about!
sometimes you just need critical feedback from otherp eople, to get ur feet back on the ground
so u can improve ur work & specially artists!
writing is bit artistic also i guess even when u write philosophy
i write poetry too i been on radio and stuff but my poetry isnt that good yet i think poetry is a lot more hard to write
to write good poetry
damn i want to play skyrim but ive to wait some months until its out