Thanks,
I appreciate the feedback and if you have any suggestions make sure to let me know!
For suggestions I would try to go a bit more into detail and maybe cover a few more areas of the game.
List of areas you could cover:
Dungeons
Guilds(not spoilers, but some basics and what strengths and issues they have)
Quests
NPCs
Enemy variety
Crafting
Lore(as in mentioning the existance of the in-game books for example, or how much one can learn about the world)
And as Skyrim is a game in a series it is usually a good idea to at least mention some of the changes from previous games and whether these were a good thing or unnecessary.