I consider myself a creative person I am currently writing a book, but i want to branch out to some fanfiction as well, would anyone care to read it, here's the basis of the book

A Nord whose name is Salem Shadowstorm grew up in the age of Dragons before they had returned, but before the fight with alduin he vanished, he awoke many years later under crumbling ruins of an ancient castle, having no memory of what had happened, and completely unaged, with his blade at his side he set off out of the castle and (after making quick work of bandits) he set out for a town, any place to see if they knew who he was, where he was, and what happened, while also trying to remaster the art of the voice which he had learned so long ago.

Good, bad, needs work, just tell me your thoughts about it

Well this for one thing belongs here: http://www.gamesas.com/forum/31-elder-scrolls-artwork-and-fan-fiction/
and 2. I think it shouldn't be called a book, no offense but alot of fan fiction authors do NOT make it into book form so calling it a "book" instead of a "fan fic" is setting yourself up for letdown I believe untill something is published it is not a book, unless you know sources on how to get it published which is normally a long vender than good luck.

Also.....From reading that try to put more passion into it, for me I certainly do not care to read it due to not catching my interest.

What type of story is it supposed to be?

No I am writing a actual book that is unrelated to this

Huh well you can take my advice and spice it up or not. Good luck

Thanks
I'm also not really good with explaining I'm more of the full story writer but what ever I plan to take any notes I can, thank you