Skyrim Poem

Post » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:35 am

I was given the assignment of a "When Poem", of which is a poem describing a past time in your life, i said "Screw that" and wrote this one, take in mind i'm a Senior in high school and my poem writing skills are sub par.

When I was a Dovahkiin

When I was a Dovahkiin
I Fus Ro Da’d
Spreading my Thu’um through the hold
Beckoning for a response

When I Fus Ro Da’d
My Dragonborn Armor
Shook Rattled
And Thundered
Against the ribs of a Dovah

When I was a Dovahkiin
My armored grip
Grasped the throats of my enemies
As I murdered
Gathering one more breath
To shout for
Force and Balance

When my Thu’um reached through the air
To the Dovah
They would finally wake

When I Fus Ro Da’d they’d come to me
I’d hold my Thu’um
Look at them maliciously
Skyward
Slay them as they landed
And
Shout
As I absorbed
The souls of the Dovah
When I was a Dovahkiin
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Hannah Whitlock
 
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Post » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:55 pm

This poem is amazing i just wish i could right like you
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Gisela Amaya
 
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Post » Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:54 pm

Lol, that is extremely nerdy but awesome :|
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Christina Trayler
 
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Post » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:21 pm

That's a very nice poem.

IN the past oh teacher dear,
I played this game with great cheer,
It is my past, just not that long,
3 month you see, can be life long.
For a dragonborn whose life is torn
between a sword and Icey form.

I really like your poem, Just what you said about the poem suposed to be about your past... got me to thinking.
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Post » Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:28 am

This poem is amazing i just wish i could right like you

And I wish I could RIGHT like you eh he he he he. Just kidding. :biggrin:

Anyway, (back to the topic at hand) I could go into anolyzing this poem and saying how great it is but I'm no good at artistic stuff so I'll just say the idea itself is original and that itself is a good thing in my book). Hope you got a good grade, you deserved it!
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