» Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:12 pm
Sounds like it will be rushed and unpolished IMO.
If you want it to be an actual BOOK and not just a story you write for fun, don't start it tomorrow, start it in a couple months. Spend time making your characters unique, and give them a back story that fleshes them out over the course of the book (as in, don't tell everything interesting about your character in the first chapter)
In the fantasy genre, I'd take George R. R. Martin as the best author at developing characters. If you've read his works, you know what I'm saying.
Basically, avoid cliches. If it's a fantasy adventure, try to avoid making it black an white like Lord of the Rings and everything that came off of it. Add antagonists that can be seen as good guys or bad, with their agenda's as to why they want the protagonist to fail varying and wading in shades of grey. The main bad guy could be an honorable hero who justifies whatever means to reach a worthy end.
Etc. This is the reason why you should take months developing characters and story before starting it. Because you're the only person controlling it, you need to carefully tell the tale and keep it interesting, and you need to know a LOT of information and judge what to show and when to keep it interesting.
[EDIT] Also, at some point, kill off your main character and have others take up his quest. Maybe he has a large group helping him, and they get spread out to perform it. More going on, more locations you can go into depth to, more cultures to flesh out to give your world believable. And the main character's death is just an out-of-left field twist you don't see often.