The Fall of the Empire, by W.H. Auden

Post » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:55 pm

I first connected this poem with Skyrim by the last verse, for obvious reasons. But reading the whole thing suggested quite a few parallels. It's about the decline of an empire, and threat of the North to a decadent southern civilisation.

I think Ulfric would like this poem.

Anyway, I've adapted it, badly, to make some of the anologies more obvious. I've had to mess with rhyme and metre a bit. Someone else could probably do a better job. The original poem is here: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15546

And here's my adaptation:


The piers are pummelled by the waves;
In a lonely field the rain
Lashes an abandoned wagon train;
Outlaws fill the mountain caves.

Fantastic grow the evening gowns;
Agents of the Thalmor pursue
Absconding Talos worshippers through
The sewers of provincial towns.

Private rites of magic send
The priestesses of Dibella to sleep;
All the mages keep
An imaginary friend.

Cerebrotonic Shalidor may
Extol the Ancient Disciplines,
But the muscle-bound Imperial marines
Mutiny for food and pay.

Titus Mede's double-bed is warm
As an unimportant clerk
Writes I DO NOT LIKE MY WORK
On a pink official form.

Unendowed with wealth or pity,
Little birds with scarlet legs,
Sitting on their speckled eggs,
Eye each flu-infected city.

Altogether elsewhere, vast
Herds of reindeer move across
Miles and miles of golden moss,
Silently and very fast.
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Dan Endacott
 
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Post » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:12 pm

Wow, that was very good. How long did it take you to adapt it?
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Post » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:02 pm

Very good
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