Pros :
the threat attempt is good , it directly connects the product to the income it provides to the company , but my personal opinion is that u saw this kind of threat somewhere else and copied it
Cons :
no L337 talk ?
what no caps ?
not even a few exclamation signs ?
obviously from now on nobody is gonna take u serious so u might as well spell whole swearing words like : f'u'c'k - see u can do it