My friend and I came up with this DLC idea : V - Skyrim

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:04 pm

hey, good story, (Sorry, prepare for grammar nazi)
"Devine" is actually spelled Divine

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:31 am

This is.....rather bad.

Forcing the character to either become a Divine or go evil? That's awful. Especially because of how when you sleep, the quest is triggered, no matter what.

People complain that there is never any consequences for your choices in TES, now that you have to choose something that will ultimately have a consequence you don't want it? No matter, you don't have to continue in the quest if you sleep. If you made a suggestion I could rewrite the quest trigger

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:46 pm

hey, good story, (Sorry, prepare for grammar nazi)
"Devine" is actually spelled Divine

HAHA Thanks for the correction

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:14 pm

People complain that there is never any consequences for your choices in TES, now that you have to choose something that will ultimately have a consequence you don't want it? No matter, you don't have to continue in the quest if you sleep. If you made a suggestion I could rewrite the quest trigger :smile:

The problem is the quest triger yes, but it's a good idea it's not like SI is not forcing you to be sheogorath.

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:01 pm

People complain that there is never any consequences for your choices in TES, now that you have to choose something that will ultimately have a consequence you don't want it? No matter, you don't have to continue in the quest if you sleep. If you made a suggestion I could rewrite the quest trigger :smile:

You could simply walk away? Awaken from you dream.. Wouldn't that be more simpler?
I like you story though, wish Bethesda would create a story as grand as this. Well, instead of simply killing a dragon and nobody really knowing about it.
Becoming a Divine in Skyrim sounds a little too much though, maybe for the last ES game that happen or something.. But not now I guess.
That's just my opinion.

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 9:56 am

You could simply walk away? Awaken from you dream.. Wouldn't that be more simpler?
I like you story though, wish Bethesda would create a story as grand as this. Well, instead of simply killing a dragon and nobody really knowing about it.
Becoming a Divine in Skyrim sounds a little too much though, maybe for the last ES game that happen or something.. But not now I guess.
That's just my opinion.

There are actually several speculation that dovahkiin will ascend as Talos 2.0

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 6:18 am

There are actually several speculation that dovahkiin will ascend as Talos 2.0

Well in the story I created, the divines tell him he is not one of them. THough he will be mistaken for one because of his magnificence, although Talos tells him he must follow in his steps. Perhaps their could be a plot twist in that?

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:30 am

DOUBLE POST

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:04 pm

Well in the story I created, the divines tell him he is not one of them. THough he will be mistaken for one because of his magnificence, although Talos tells him he must follow in his steps. Perhaps their could be a plot twist in that?

Still doesn't fit in all that well, if he's mistaken as one isn't he basically one? Well in some ways.. He has the same powers right?

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:37 am

Still doesn't fit in all that well, if he's mistaken as one isn't he basically one? Well in some ways.. He has the same powers right?

The story of who the Paragon is will be revealed, I am not disclosing who you actually are yet. Because there's is a secret behind the Paragon that you either spare or kill. The story is mostly written, my friend and I estimate that the game content would last 30 hours in game time if you take your time.

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:31 am

The story of who the Paragon is will be revealed, I am not disclosing who you actually are yet. Because there's is a secret behind the Paragon that you either spare or kill. The story is mostly written, my friend and I estimate that the game content would last 30 hours in game time if you take your time.

Well, if you actually get a decent team of modders, your dream can become a reality.

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:25 pm

Well, if you actually get a decent team of modders, your dream can become a reality.

I don't know, I at least want to try and pitch it to bethesda when my full story is done. Probably won't happen, but that's why it's called a dream :/

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:07 am

I don't know, I at least want to try and pitch it to bethesda when my full story is done. Probably won't happen, but that's why it's called a dream :/

Trust me, they won't listen.
Try sending to some of the popular modders, such as the guys who made moonpath to elyswer.

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:06 pm

Trust me, they won't listen.
Try sending to some of the popular modders, such as the guys who made moonpath to elyswer.

Alright when I'm finished I will pitch. C:

OT: What do you guy's think about accessing the powers/ weapons? How do you think they should be accessed?

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 6:35 pm

Alright when I'm finished I will pitch. C:

OT: What do you guy's think about accessing the powers/ weapons? How do you think they should be accessed?

Pitch it to the modders.
I reckon the weapons should be accessed with a conjuration spell.

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 9:31 am

Pitch it to the modders.
I reckon the weapons should be accessed with a conjuration spell.

Conjuration eh? In player mode, I think that would be great! Should they cost any mana?

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:53 pm

Conjuration eh? In player mode, I think that would be great! Should they cost any mana?

No, since they are rightfully yours.

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:53 pm

No, since they are rightfully yours.

Makes sense, Didn't make sense to me why Arvak was a spell that cost mana. How about design for the corrupt paragon, should it mirror the story of the normal paragon and the art design of him? Or should it be independent?

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 6:21 am

Probably him with purple darkish theme going on, and a demonicly scarey face.

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:46 am

Probably him with purple darkish theme going on, and a demonicly scarey face.

Alright, the normal Paragon glows with a golden aura. I was thinking of a dark kind of misty deal with the dark paragon with your coloring. How does that sound?

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 4:54 am

Alright, the normal Paragon glows with a golden aura. I was thinking of a dark kind of misty deal with the dark paragon with your coloring. How does that sound?

sounds good, maybe the armor looks tattered and beaten?

» Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:39 am

sounds good, maybe the armor looks tattered and beaten?

Perhaps even battle worn? SHould there' be a helmet or no? The normal paragon will have a helmet, unless anyone objects? The divine form I was thinking should hold it's independence.

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:36 pm

Perhaps even battle worn? SHould there' be a helmet or no? The normal paragon will have a helmet, unless anyone objects? The divine form I was thinking should hold it's independence.

there would have to be a balance between the two, if one gets a helmet what does the other get of equal value?

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 10:31 pm

would the corrupted paragon happen to look like http://store.miniwargaming.com/images/D/chaos-space-marine-lord.jpg this?

» Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:41 pm

there would have to be a balance between the two, if one gets a helmet what does the other get of equal value?

Good point, Felivastus had mentioned that the head should be devious or evil. Perhaps it could have a tented or torn helmet that looks old but majestic. What do you think?

EDIT: LOL a little less colorful, though the demonic tattered wings looks like a good idea!