Hardly anything to do with Skyrim, post this in the community discussion section or the fanfic section please.
>]Your sharp retort has dealt the final blow to the Forum Fiend! She falls to the ground gasping as the energy ebbs from her CRT. [20 points] Score: 55
>] Examine body
>] You find 3 gold, Forum Fiend meat and a +1 keyboard of Internet Winning.
sorry, but your story was poorly written and uninteresting, no offence of course.
You know, if you have to say 'no offense,' then what you're saying is probably rather offensive. Just tagging that on there doesn't make it any kinder.
You're entitled to your opinion. But my opinion is that the original post is more well-written, imaginative and entertaining than any other post in this thread.