Hi all,Kenshi: As below, and - lots of great work on the script, but I assume, as you said, that the materials "will of course be made up", I am very much a Lovecraft purist and would personally prefer the voice of the protagonist, and the direction of the storyline (until we go beneath the mansion) to be as Lovecraft wrote it/them. What you have written is excellent, but would require re-working/re-writes of the story. So it would be that we re-wrote the story for the sake of the voice acting, rather than wrote the voice acting script, for the sake of the story.Nyarla:As above, and it may be feasible to use the 'black box' for level 0 approach, however I think it would be easier, make more sense, and follow the story more closely if we had a text intro screen, with the initial story (and there may be the possibility to have a voice-over there) on it. Then the flat would the first actual level. As I said, I felt that reading out the paper would not be good, however when the paper is picked up (or even before) it would be good to here Kenshi's voice saying something like "Hmmm this looks interesting" or somethinmg like that.Funny is a possibility, bust as you say, would only be necessary posthumously if the protagonist was retelling the story. I like the idea that this is the first time the protagonist encounters the Lurking Fear, especially since in this version, he goes beneath the mansion.As per the trigger for the opening. Im (fairly) sure that I can get the viewing of the paper to initiate either the opening of the door, or the actual ending of the level. I am just not sure yet
exactly how to script it!One of the main things, I would hope to avoid, is to be stuck in an eternal loop with this first intro level and not get beyond it to the real exciting stuff of level 2 & 3, and yes I realise that most of the delay so far as been due to my anolly retentive attitude! :rolleyes:

I feel the real creativity should be saved for level 3 under the martense mansion, bearing in mind this was not written in Lovecrafts story.Guys/Girls/Hybrids/Ghouls/Favoured of Cthulhu (I dont actually know what gender anybody is) let me know how you feel about this. I would prefer if we stuck to Lovecraft fairly closely, and if we finalised the first level, as Im itching to get on to the second and dont want to get bogged down with the first. However, if you both (and we all) feel strongly that the game should take this other direction, then Im cool, it is after all a team effort.Cheers,Chris.