Oh, that's reminded me of a book I really hated which was one of Raymond E Feist's, where he claimed that his roleplaying meant that his books almost wrote themselves: evidently it didn't. His writing quality could be a bit inconsistent but this one (I forget which, sorry: I threw it out in disgust; it would've been around 15 years back, though) was far worse than anything I'd read to date. Pretty much the entire book was written in the style of "they did this. And then they did that. And then they did something else." It was terrible.
Well I do Auel a bit of a disservice. She does write those sections well, and they're about nothing other than the minutiae of day to day survival, of one isolated person, who knows no vocal language. It's well written, it's just that nothing really happens,
for five years.And yeah, I don't like books that are obviously just some nerd's roleplaying with a thinly disguised DnD clone.
I don't know how many people have read the TEs novels, but a teaser was released of a chapter, written with some of the most awful, turgid and cliched prose outside of a dark and stormy night. The actual book was pretty good, and the second one I really liked. That chapter was still awful though, I've no idea what Keyes was thinking when he wrote that. It's like the books were written by a professional writer, but that one chapter was written by a high school student.