I was ready to say this was so far so standard, none of the critiques were different than ones I had heard a million times before... but then I got to the Leveling and Combat points.
See Below
There are No Consequences = Very true
Leveling is Confused = Disagree
Combat is Weak = I don't have a problem with it but it's far from perfect
Players are Impotent = very true
I do not understand how a human being with a perfectly functional brain, could have a problem with the leveling in Skyrim. It's so simplistic, it's useless, how is this difficult? Also, his arguement doesn't seem to be terribly related to the Leveling system, and more a complaint about experience points... which seems inconsistent with his statements about how the player can't effect things, in that Experience points are rather integral to most RPGs I have ever seen, and you can earn them doing anything. How can someone be impotent, while also getting a reward for your actions is bad.
Honestly it looks like someone told this guy: Write an article about why this game is bad.
At least that is how it seems to me.