today i went on patrol with the commander and some rookie operative, we got halfway and we found a scoutfor the security, the rookie wanted revenge because he had realised he had killed his brother in the night, so he was going to kill him when he went round the corner. we didnt kowthis at the time but there was a squad behind the scout ,rookie was captured, we followed them, that parkour came in handy.
we saw them go into the airport he was being tortured we came in and had killed them except the scout the commander shot him in the back of the leg, he was wounded on the floor so the operative could kill him, but he said you should never kill somebody like that no even if he did kill his brother brother the medic patch up his nose, the medic said he woulld be out of the fight for a couple of weeks brocken nose and large gashes across his face and arm]s ,he will probably have scars. apart from that an average day........

EES GUD TIME TO RUN, COWARDS!

And assuming he does make allies with both sides, I doubt that would last long. Maybe a month or two, but civil war most likely won't end because everyone's friends again.

But on the bright side, me has new plot twist in mind. Oh plot twists, why you so yummy?

he said tht the guy flying it was rogue

Day 131

My squad has decided to make a final push towards the robot prototype, it appears that the medic has a new "surprise" for us should we get hurt, thats a nice thought isn't it? A medic wants us to get hurt. Anyway we decided to make our move in about 3 days, we need the time to send scouts to scout out the areas, find possible sniper hiding spots ahead of time, and also so the scouts can monitor any big movements within the area.

I've been taking the time to get to know my team better, I thought that if we knew each other better we might be able to know each others weaknesses so we can protect them better, or should anyone go rogue I'll know how to get rid of them quicker... that sounded much more darker then it should have been.

My squad consists of 2 soldiers, a operative (however he was injured yesterday), 3 engineers (myself included), and a medic. The first soldier is name Tom Myers, hes a pretty well built guy, hes a gun nut and never goes down, he been known to take a shot and just fall to the ground with his pistol out. The next soldier is named Cole Keyes, hes pretty huge, I mean HUGE, bigger then the bouncer, Ivan, The Jesse, or anyone I've ever seen. Hes been carrying a mini gun he calls "Sasha" in honor of his deceased wife. The Medic is named DR. (He won't shut up about it), Warren Parker, hes well built like Tom, but he only carries a pistol, hes not a good shot. Hes the one who has the "surprise" of us. Lastly, the Cooper brothers are my engineers, their Arabic I don'tknow if Cooper really is their last names but they do a good job and thats all that matters. The older one Basil is a bit of an alcoholic, hes always drinking and designing new and better blueprints, well atleast he thinks that. The younger one, Waqqas, is incredibility quiet and is always staying near Basil, its reasonable as hes all Waqqas has now on the Ark.

This is my squad and I'm happy to have them aboard, strangely though when I asked them what side they support they all just go quiet.. except Basil, who is drunk and usually ends up saying "Who cares! If their booze and guns, I'm a happy man!", I think I need to get a better engineer...

I'm skipping ahead to the day after they made their move.

Day 135:

Yesterday was it. The day we planned, and prepared for. It can all be described with one word. Bust. We started about midnight, and gathered at the abandoned warehouse near the ocean. There, we checked weapons, ammunition, medical supplies, and anything else we needed. Right as we started to exit the building, we heard faint footsteps coming from a dark part of the warehouse. I started to walk towards a big crate sitting in the corner, and I heard faint, breathing. I shone my flashlight in the corner, and there was Jack. he was sitting there, sweating bullets. It was as if he had a dark secret.

"What the hell are you doing here, Jack? You are supposed to be protecting the house!"

"I came to see what you were doing. I've been 'overhearing' your conversations with the others." He pointed to my squad, "I...I....I didn't want you to get hurt on your mission, so I decided to tag along..."

"You know this is worth punishment. Get back to the house immediately!" He got up, and started sprinting towards the alley. He did a couple parkour moves onto the roof, and disappeared from sight.

"Alright, now that that 'annoyance' (better word please?) is over, we can continue the mission. Let's move out!"

We took off towards the building where the robot was held. I sent out our operative to do some scouting in a resistance disguise. He came back, and reported no signs of enemy troops. This was good. We crouched around the corner, and came upon the warehouse. The only source of light was a nearby lamppost. I busted the lock with some bolt cutters, and we entered. The operative stood guard outside, letting us know of any disturbance. There it was, the prototype. It was a thing of beauty. The paint glistened in the moon light. Luckily, the thing was silent as a mouse. That thing could've gone through a church, and not been heard. This was our only chance to return it. The Security were scheduled to attack at dawn the next day.

We rolled the thing out of the large door, and made it half way out before I saw a beam of light pass by. The shadow of a figure ran between cover, and as I put my focus on the figure, a voice from the dark yelled "HALT! Drop your weapons! Get on your knees, hands behind your head!".

How could they have known we were taking back the robot? There had to have been a mole! But who? Not...No...It couldn't of been. I mean, he wanted to kill me, but he wouldn't go as far as this....

(If you didn't catch my drift with that last sentence, you must be new xD PLOT TWISTS FTW!!!! Sorry for the long post....)

i get that he's trying to make some friends on both sides but as of now it feels realy rushed you know? its like one day both sides are after him and then all the sudden he has a group of ppl on the security and hes doing a mission for the security idk, i just thought he was supposed to stay neutral and not be trying to play both sides like a merc, but thats just my two cents

Oh, I can see where this Jack business is going. It'll ruin my awesome ending planned ou-
Unless I plot twist the plot twist! Gods, plot twists are AWESOME.

Also, TG Agent, if they were found by someone, how did the Mummy return to write in his journal the next day?


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I agree - He's not staying very neutral, and over the course of the journal, he's sided with the security and been in a security mindset more than he's been with the resistance.

Well, I'm sure that his need for security friends will work later, maybe he'll use it to convince some security grunt to let him do something that most "citizens" would be arrested for. Also, nice plot twist I like how ______ was able to contact the resistance about the squad trying to take the bot prototype.

I feel this story is going to be one of the great fan fictions out there Hell, if we can keep up the creative storyline from getting stall or turning into a one-sided story, then I might actually write this up (With permission of the forum members of course, as I keep saying this ISN'T my story.) which may lead to a future sequel? :spotted owl:

oh and I might as well award everyone with a :ninja: .

Yay! My first Pocket Ninja!

I'll care for it and feed it and call it Joe.


When this finally ends, I'd like nothing more than for you or me or someone to take all the actual journal entries and post them somewhere where they can be easily read by any and every Brink fan.

Yes, I've always wanted one of these... Ah, I love ninjas

I still need a turtle

You've got a lot to live up to. The work following is written by the great Peter Chimeara, and all credit should go to him. This is possibly the most famous video game fan-fic there is.

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil
John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons. "This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!"
So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons
"I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.

I cried.

http://operatorchan.org/vg/src/vg64252_Manly%20tears.jpg

He had the journal with him. He was captured, and when the guards weren't looking in his make-shift cell, he wrote an entry. Just a minor detail that doesn't really need explained IMO.

The first time I read it I plasmaed my shorts.

Yeah I don't really care about that so much anymore but... It doesn't really make any sense that a high ranking security official/doctor would all-of -the-sudden go "rogue" and attack a hospital like a terrorist. The security is fighting to save the Ark, not destroy it. That post did not seem to follow the plot well IMHO...

The guy wanted to make a sudden shock twist. No one protested, so we did our best to find a way to explain it so that it didn't feel tacked on.

In honor of me!

Lol, same here. I would get the ninja to teach the turtle kung-fu and have my very own Baby Mutant Ninja Turtle. :toughninja:

Also, I've already heard that Doom fan fic, in fact theres an animation on youtube, if I remember correctly enough.

Lastly, we're running low on posts now another 40 or so before it maxes out. We're reaching our final act here folks!

We could start another...But make it clear that this, what you and I and others are doing now...Should be kept to a minimum! And to also read everything before they post.

I think the attempting to get allies forced a new arc into the journal. We can't just cut it short, or it sticks out and feels too... weird. Introducing named people for the sake of securing one robot is too much. We can try and have it run its course as fast as it can go, but we'd have to focus on progressing the plot, and not leaving any major plot holes left unanswered. If anything, this arc should be the one where we fill up all the plot holes. Also, as a reminder, the Mummy is to play the role of a spectator, staying neutral against both factions. I'd also like to say he works only for his family, not to fight, but I'm not sure if that's the general concensus. However, he has to back off from the security. Every major step the Mummy takes pushes from away from the Resistance and toward the Security.

Day 136

So the resistance have captured me. Again. They're only letting me write in my journal because the Warrior has gained a few promotions, and has taken a liking to my journal. He must love a good story.

They seperated me from my squadmates. However, they're all in the same cell - Only I'm seperated from the rest. Why am I getting special treatment? What's so important about me? I asked myself these questions while being interrogated. They asked me a bunch of random questions, whether my family was ok, if I trusted my squadmates, and if I trusted them. I said I trusted my squadmates, but didn't trust the resistance. They seemed to understand that I didn't trust them, and didn't beat me like the last time I was captured. They sent me back to my cell with a bowl of hot stew waiting for me. I looked around, and it seems that most, if not all prisoners of war here have a steaming bowl of stew. I drank it carefully, but there didn't seem to be anything wrong with it. Infact, it was pretty good.

Warren, the egotisical medic in my squad, kept eyeing me from accross the jail room thingy. Infact, he kept eyeing everyone. Basil asked him (rather loudly) what the matter was, but Warren wouldn't answer. He just stared back at Basil, then at Waqqas. Especially Waqqas. Warren stared at him for the longest time, it was disturbing. Waqqas scootched away from him and looked at me. He had such a blank face on him, it was hard to tell what he was thinking about, if anything.

By the time the sun set completely and I could see the stars from a rather large bullet hole in my cell, I could only think about Jack. If he could follow me all the way to the outskirts of Container City, he might try it again.

I understand that we need to not really make him work for the Security. I know it's been said, but I'll say it again. I only did that so he would have some friends/allies in the security.

Any ideas on how he could make friends in the Resistance? I'm only doing what I would do on the Ark. I'd make friends on both sides, in case something bad were to happen in one side.

Day 137

They blind folded me and sat me in a room they removed the blind fold and walked out. I sat there for what felt like hours and then the door opened and a tall fit looking man in a buisness suit walked in holding a mug and sat down. He slowly sips the mug of what i can only guess was coffie his eyes were ice cold and he had a blank expression on his face he stared at me for a long time before speaking and when he finaly did i wished he never had. "Your squadmates have been executed." He said. I stared at him blinking. "Wha?..." i was felling woozy and i almost through up. "Don't you want to know why?" He said. "Why.." I said. "They had to die... to keep you safe." he said. Now that pissed me off are they realy try to tell me THEY were the enemy "Oh right cause your trying to protect me right? What a load of sh1t!.". He stared at me unphased and just as cold as ever. "Realy? Is it that hard to belive? Think about how you've been treated here we haven't layed a finger on you since you've been here. We even let you keep the dang journal!" He said. "What ever!" i said "You still won't let me go!". "We can't! Your squadmates were going to kill you once the mission was over the securety forces can't trust you! They think you were compromised when Ivan got his hands on you.". "That doesnt even make sence why would i work for the ppl who captured me! Took me away from my children!". "Mabey they thought that because with in a day you had already given us there armour and turret blue prints!". I was shocked by what he said not that it was a surprise but by how true it was. I HAD given them a lot of information about the security. "But that was because they threatend my family!" i said. "Mabey so but they don't know that. For all they know Ivan rescued your from that firefight and in a way he did, very heroic of him to drag you out of there all rambo stile wasn't it?". "What are you getting at?" i said. "Ivan knew you had information, information that they needed, that we (the resistance) needed, and Ivan was willing to give his life for you and the information you held.". "Why are you telling me this?". "Because Mummy, the security did the same thing at one point.". Now that confused me i didn't understand what he meant and i ask him "What do you mean?". "Oh don't be so stupid! You think it was a coincidence that the Bug took a likeing to you? Well it wasn't, they needed to get information on what was going on in and around container city and you were the man to give it to them. So they protected you, gave you that weapon buff then the ceasar revolver, witch as you will remember was the most powerful weapon they gave to any of the workers, why is that you think that you, just some random engi gets all that speacial treatment? Then to top it all off they bring you into there half of the ark! As far away from us as you can get! Then twice they came to rescue you from us the first a failure the second a success. Then you made that fatal mistake, you told the Jesse about the armour! I mean that is dumb! He works for the security and you tell him,basicly,that you betrayed them! I mean What did you expect?". I was numb it made so much sence . "So no rescues come'n huh?". He said "In a word no. But the security forces ARE moving in on us and they'll be here in a day or two mabey sooner if they're determened enough to find you but don't be fooled this isn't a rescue mission there on it's an execution mission and your there target." "Why are you telling me this?" i ask again. "Because we need to move, soon if we want to keep you alive, there aren't many places we can hide from the security but there are a few. And we need to do it with your full cooperation. This needs to be Quick and Quiet if it even has the slightest chance of sucess. Will you cooperate with us or not? Cause if not we will leave you in your cell and we will let you face your fate alone.". "What about my kids?". " Brittnay will recive a VERY persavsive letter in the mail tomorrow asking her to adopt Jack and Rebecca. Once she signs that paper she is the leagal garrdian of your children and the security cannot and will not lay a fingger on them or Brittany.". "I'm not so sure about this i can't leave my kids and just up and join the Resistance." "You won't be leaveing them forever only untill we can sort this out and you won't be joining the Resistance we will just be protecting you. Trust me Mummy this is the only way you will ever be able to see your kids again.". He waited for a responce and as i thought it over i thought about my kids and how there lives would be if i died and they were left with no one that scared me so much i.... i didn't see any way out of this so i said yes and we leave tomorrow morning.

Beautiful job Bloodhound!!! Eliminating the rushed named characters, pushing away Security, explaining a heck of a bunch of loopholes, and even protecting his family in a single shot!!!

I am very impressed indeed, and my faith in this story has been restored!

Have an icecream cone :icecream:

ICE CREAM!!!! haha thank you thank you *takes a bow* haha jk i just wanted to make the story push forward as smoothly and quickly as i could and since he was with the security for a while now hes back with resistance all the time dropping the biggest bomb i could on our character. i'm glad you like it it took me like an hour to wright it all out and trying my best to edit it as i went. but yea i hope some one will continue the journal entrys cause where running out of space and have a lot of story left to tell and to blaven did you ever think this would be so big and is this the way you thought the story was gonna go?

My gods, Bloodhound, You're my hero. I was planning to do the brunt of that in around 7 posts, but you went and did it all beautifully, closed up all the plot holes but the important ones.